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Rather Disgusting
Contributed by
01_zanzebar
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:38:27 PM in AEST
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Innocence?
That I laugh
You know as well as I do
Innocence does not exist
You may be young
To be an object of judgement
The acts of a child
Are that of an adult
It is not a subject of debate
This much Iam certain
Those who laugh at little things
Are those who laugh at bad things as well
It is easy for me
A fledgling adult
To be as disgraceful as Iam
But I come from a long line of disgusting acts
Be not so fast as to criticise me
The longing to be innocent is beautiful
Innocence is peaceful
It is a trait Iam most fond of
Just the lie saying Iam innocent
Truly is a sign
Or am I just blind
No, Iam right, I like it this way
This eternal struggle that stems from within
Comes from the ghosts, inlay in my mind
This is my destiny I build from my experiences
That I love, is that Iam denied
You are young
So very perfect
Innocence is a virtue
I abstand to with-hold
I never want you to grow up
To loose your innocence
Your sweet look in your eyes
The feeling of been your age
Swells into my heart once again
To who I love
And thoust understand me
Iam in love with your innocence
A weakness inside Iam unable to set free
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Re: Rather Disgusting
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by Ripper_Something_Unusual on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:48:13 PM AEST
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| well done rowan....u pedo. Just joking good stuff...good stuff... |
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Re: Rather Disgusting
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by brokensoul on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:48:18 PM AEST
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| i agree innocence does not exist very powerful write |
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Re: Rather Disgusting
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 08:49:43 PM AEST
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Hmm. I take it this is about loving someone **younger** than yourself?
It's a very well written poem. Some poems are more poetic than others, this one seems quite poetic to me.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Rather Disgusting
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by 01_zanzebar on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:25:18 AM AEST
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the way i represent my wordage in my poetry is the type of emotion it broils in my heart, some are more linear than other, some are very powerfully written and some are simple. The feelings i have about 'younger' girls is that of one ive have come to accept, so its more of a story to tell, than a poem to reciet, this is hard for some to understand, but its true.
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