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Lost Within
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 09:42:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lost Within
I feed off negativity
I make you bleed
I live within thee
I control every move
This game is mine
You are a pawn
In endless time
Every thought conceived
Is used against thee
You underestimate
The likes of me
It's your death I need
You are losing
With every move
You lost your life to me
One life
Is all you have
And it's mine
One life ended
You are to die
One move at a time
This game is mine
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Re: Lost Within
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 09:59:19 PM AEST
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Ruthlessness..........really a very profound write......wonder talent!
Enjoyed this one......I'm sorry I've missed your poems.......try to get everyone's, but so many.......thank you so much for your comment!
Poetic hugs
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Re: Lost Within
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by pixie on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:17:12 AM AEST
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wonderful write, great flow,
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