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My Shell
Contributed by
8kiwi8
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 09:29:51 AM in AEST
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My shell is not an artificial part of me
My shell doesn't act as me instead of me
When you open a cockle, what's resting inside is still a cockle
What's inside my shell is still me
Just an element I prefer to be selfish with
I'm not hiding and Im not afraid to show what's inside my shell...I just choose not to
I know my personification and I wouldn't be me if I didn't have a shell to share with the world,
I'd be nothing but an empty shell on a sand-filled English beach,
just like all the others,
sculpted round damp sand to imitate a living soul
I wouldn't be me.
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Re: My Shell
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:00:30 AM AEST
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"you dont know the real me, the shell on the outside is all you see"
This is very similar to your poem i think.
A nice way of putting it.
Good description.
Phil
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Re: My Shell
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by 8kiwi8 on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:15:55 AM AEST
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thanks :-)
Hmmm...it's not really about the real me being covered up, it's about me keeping PART of me to myself. But thankyou :-) x x x |
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Re: My Shell
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:39:59 PM AEST
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| i think we all got a shell. never really though about it be4, but the side of ourselve we show, and aspire to be. though provoking. i like =) |
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Re: My Shell
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by diamond_tears on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:52:45 PM AEST
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| hmmm... makes u think. great poem. very interesting and insightful hehee big words for me :P xxxx |
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Re: My Shell
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 05:02:00 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking
nice one
x x |
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