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Take Me Home
Contributed by
white_rain_angel
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:06:20 AM in AEST
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take me home to my cloud pillows and my could blankets, sunny skies and sweet lullabies, my home is past that shiny gate, speak to me with your kind words, where my angels will sing me to sleep, i am their free bird with a lost sould, so now i must fix my wings and fly away home, i need brighter days and warmer hearts, take me home from this crazy earth, bring me to your heavens above, angels guard me, sing to me high above, in the skies a lullaby, please won't you take me home, to my heavens above
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Re: Take Me Home
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by pixie on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:07:32 AM AEST
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this isa touching write.... great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Take Me Home
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by white_rain_angel on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:12:15 AM AEST
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| thanks..... i will look for the poems you write too, and give a few comments. thanks again |
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Re: Take Me Home
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:21:48 AM AEST
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Glad to read your note.... This is sadly written..very touching..Hope you feel better soon..
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Re: Take Me Home
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by darkfairy1188 on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:39:57 AM AEST
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| yeah, i know how u feel. i would never commit suicide, but sometimes it feels like i could. it helps me to write about it. |
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Re: Take Me Home
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by Black13 on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:02:19 PM AEST
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take me home to my cloud pillows and my could blankets,
sunny skies and sweet lullabies,
my home is past that shiny gate,
speak to me with your kind words,
where my angels will sing me to sleep,
i am their free bird with a lost sould,
so now i must fix my wings and fly away home,
i need brighter days and warmer hearts,
take me home from this crazy earth,
bring me to your heavens above,
angels guard me,
sing to me high above,
in the skies a lullaby,
please won't you take me home,
to my heavens above
It's very beautiful. I like the flow to it. I'm not sure how you meant the poem but I like what I read out of it.
Very nice write.
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