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blood over my tears
Contributed by
dean
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:49:35 PM in AEST
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These tears i cry are just for him,
This blood that creeps from my veins is still to thin.
My poetry i write is only for me,
If i post it then every-one will see,
Why suicide is my only friend,
And my love for him will never end
I can not write poetry, i know, i know,
this is just one attempt for me to show,
And even if he doesnt care,
My blood will fall with my tears,
and haunt my while i dream of my fears.
*blessed be!*
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dean
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2004-07-18 13:49:35]
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Re: blood over my tears
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by pixie on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:58:08 PM AEST
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good poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: blood over my tears
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by RhythmBndt on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:17:58 PM AEST
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| The 2nd line gave me chills...Very nice write. |
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Re: blood over my tears
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by Kie-Kie on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:51:17 PM AEST
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That was awesome Tipsy!!! *hugs* see I told you you were good...
Love YA,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: blood over my tears
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by tylerzmum on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 11:38:12 AM AEST
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| oh, honey, i hope you get through your depression. I'm in the same place right now, I'm just lucky i have a child to keep me here, otherwise i'd be lost. it will get better |
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