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IF I STAINED YOU I’M SORRY.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 03:50:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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You looked so teary eyed.
I wanted to reach out and hug you.
You said you thought I was safe from myself
I felt like a disappointment to you.
Sure you barely know me.
But it feels like weve met before.
I dont know why Ive got that feeling!
But makes me feel so raw.
I dont know why I like you
I guess its because you care.
I know that I hurt you!
Thats why I want to disappear.
I cant begin to think of how much I must stain you.
But please dont think I do it just because I feel like it
You moved on and walked away from me.
Thats why I felt like *****!
Then, today, you did the same thing!
Thats why I just gave up.
I wanted to say sorry,
But when I turned youd just walked off!
Before that I spoke to you.
While I was being held and hand cuffed by the police,
You kept your head down while I shouted at you.
As I stood I felt my self break.
I was shouting because I was breaking inside!
I was saying the truth, not spitting out lies!
People dont help me, they leave me to rot.
I know you care for me, but its not enough!
When you go in a cell youre treated like your cracked!
There was no sweet stuff; I promise you I was smacked!
But hey, its the twisted girls, word against the coppers,
So who would you trust, ME or the OTHERS?
I dont make big things, I cant see the use.
Bottom line, is that Im the broken fuse.
So think what you like, Ive only heard it all before!
Im sorry if I stain you, but I still feel so sore!!!
Im haunted because I see you,
Some places that I go.
IM A MUCKED UP LITTLE FREAK!
Yeah, I know
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deathdrop
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2004-07-18 15:50:06]
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Re: IF I STAINED YOU I’M SORRY.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 04:20:13 PM AEST
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I was intrigued, and you asked . . .
'Disturbing' doesn't quite cut it as a descriptor.
"I can’t begin to think of how much I must stain you.
But please don’t think I do it just because I feel like it…"
Keep writing, as I hope it helps . . . |
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Re: IF I STAINED YOU I’M SORRY.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 05:55:19 PM AEST
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| Strange and unfamiliar world to me... But well expressed. |
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Re: IF I STAINED YOU I’M SORRY.
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 07:27:47 PM AEST
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| the title is ingenious, the write is entertaining but like Timebot, a totally unfamiliar world to me... still... a good write/ |
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