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Castle Of Illusions
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:41:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Common sense
was my only rule
no emotional torture
no being rude
but that was a monster I created
and it lashed out
as I backed out,
my wounds are healing
the blood no longer flows
but I've lost my soul
now I'm inknown
I can deal with the rejection
but there is no cure
for the Infection,
emotionally
I can not break free
psychosphere is damaging
all Innervisions have been shattered
and scattered
now nothing matters.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-07-18 18:41:14]
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Re: Castle Of Illusions
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 07:12:33 PM AEST
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A sad piece, but well-written and expressed. Keep going, for often the light lies just around some of the darkest bends.
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Re: Castle Of Illusions
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:45:33 PM AEST
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SecretWind........this is a great write.....who could have ever discribed it better than you did......innervisions shattered and scattered. you are a word master! Now nothing else matters.......fantastic wording you write
I loved it from top to bottom!
Poetic hugs
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Re: Castle Of Illusions
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 03:02:36 AM AEST
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Hey handsome u almost have me weeping again. Sad but yet a powerfull masterpeice.
luv, huggs, tears,
emy |
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