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Secretly
Contributed by
imlostbutloved69
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 07:56:29 PM in AEST
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I'm the girl in her room, crying
Silently dieing
The one nobody cares about
Just watch her sit and pout
Her wounds, no one can heal
Because everything she feels is nothing but real
Just be there when she needs someone to care
Promise........ to be there
Stay with her when everyone else walks away
Promise you won't leave, but to stay
Hold her while she cries
Wip away the tears from her eyes
And when you're the reason she's crying
Try and get her to smile, and if you fail, keep on trying
Be someone she can rely on
A shoulder to cry on
Hold her near
Love her dear
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Re: Secretly
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:58:09 PM AEST
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i really liked this one. simple and a great write.
keep it up! |
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Re: Secretly
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:13:38 PM AEST
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U know... I 've always old each one of my nieces and nephews that I'll always be there for them no matter what... and I mean that...
I want to be there for them... and this hits home for one of them... I always try and be there for her... Thanks for the wrote simple and effect... love it!
~Donna~ |
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