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Life
Contributed by
BloodyBlackRose
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 08:51:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We all want something in life
Most people can't get it
We all think life is just a waste of time and why bother to live it
Most people think it is just a sad excuse of being here
They thought wrong
Life is something prescouse god gave us
A life is a soul that teaches you how to love,taste,touch,see and smell
We learn how to do thoughs thing by learning
We are nothing but distroyers on this earth
But we have been given it
Jesus sacrificed his self for us monsters
And we don't diserve it
So just live it out like it was supose to be
Copyright ©
BloodyBlackRose
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2004-07-18 20:51:54]
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Re: Life
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:56:49 PM AEST
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well i kinda like the message here,
God gave us life. Lets live it.
i think you should edit some words becuase they are mispelled..and it would make the poem better if you did =)
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