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I love you
Contributed by
Wiccan
on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Everything thing has gone wrong
I'm torn between
You... My family
My family... you
I don't want to choose
On one side I loose you
The other side, my family
I role it around in my head
I have to have the hard choice
Why can't my love ones just deal?
City boy meets small town girl
It's not so easy
But I did choose
I love you and my family
But I want to be with you
Good times
Bad times
You've been there for me,
Youve loved me
For all I am
For all I shall be
And I love you
Copyright ©
Wiccan
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2002-10-26 16:00:00]
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Re: I love you
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by XoIrishXo on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 04:10:45 PM AEST
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The people who most often give us the ultimatum to choose are normally the ones who lose. Sounds like an icky situation...I wish you well! Your poem was honest and real...nice write! Good Luck!
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Re: I love you
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 02:38:42 PM AEST
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| VERY TOUGH ON YOU BEING PULLED IN TWO DIRECTIONS.IT'S JUST MY OPINION BUT FAMILY TO ME SHOULD ALWAYS COME FIRST YOU NEVER KNOW IF THAT PERSON WILL BE THERE 5 YEARS FROM NOW.TOUGH,BUT GOOD WRITE,GOOD LUCK.CHRISTINA |
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