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in the woods
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:23:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
there is a world of creatures
living in my backwoods,
they all have happy souls
and live as creatures should,
they can lighten one's heart
mostly sweet, kind and clever,
yet some are impish and haughty
a few are really quite naughty,
little beings of these woods
wearing little magical hoods,
using old tree trunks as tables
weaving well woven fables.
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Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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Re: in the woods
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by Dusty on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:27:27 PM AEST
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Awww, cute use of imagery. I like!!
~Dusty~
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Re: in the woods
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by MLCstar on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:37:41 PM AEST
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| This poem is so lovely and sweet. It lightens the heart and puts a smile on your face. Well done, as usual. |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:43:47 PM AEST
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Nessa, this is outstanding. I love the picture. Nice to see some light fare from you, my dear.
Big hugs,
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:47:03 PM AEST
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This is really very sweet, Ness....Loved it..
Hugs
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Re: in the woods
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by BrandySwanson on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:55:24 PM AEST
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very lovely poem great job love the imagery.
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Re: in the woods
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by venkat on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 11:58:38 PM AEST
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very lovely poem..various types of creatures
"they can lighten one's heart mostly sweet, kind and clever,.yet some are impish and haughty"..good introduction..:-) venkat |
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Re: in the woods
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:55:22 AM AEST
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sooooo cute
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Re: in the woods
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by pixie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:21:31 AM AEST
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Awwww this is so cute, I loved it, it really cheered me up.....*hugs you*
pixie xx |
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Re: in the woods
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by blueheart on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:07:36 AM AEST
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| Finally something that made me smile today. Lovely piece. |
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Re: in the woods
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:14:50 AM AEST
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sweet and lightt. Nature can fill with such simple joy - nice to see this write from you .
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Re: in the woods
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by WinterFawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 02:45:58 PM AEST
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Very cute and magical verse. I really enjoyed reading this....made me smile.
WinterFawn |
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Re: in the woods
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:41:20 PM AEST
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A smiley poem, which made me think of my old grandmother's house in the countryside, which had a huge back garden, ringed with oaks . . .
By the way - what's the thing with the colours? I want colours! Gimme colours! lol. Mick!?? |
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Re: in the woods
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by Merry on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:01:56 PM AEST
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oh this is soooo cute - and I think you are right there are creatures in the woods LOL well at least Gunnar thinks so
giggling
merry |
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Re: in the woods
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by tifrob on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:59:04 PM AEST
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A wonderful happy poem. I liked it. Thanks!
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Re: in the woods
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 04:05:37 AM AEST
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| I see the Fairies and the little people have visited you Lady Fawn hang on to them do not let them go they kind of grow on you. LOLs bernard. |
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Re: in the woods
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:39:37 AM AEST
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i realy enjoyed this a truly magical feel.
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Re: in the woods
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:03:59 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa, you are right this is so lighthearted, and a very delightful write. I'm glad you write lighthearted again!
What you see in the woods is grand!
Loved it
Consue |
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Re: in the woods
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by Always on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:02:12 PM AEST
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| Awsome...I have not read anything that took me back to my childhood in ages....tx...*s* |
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Re: in the woods
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by Gentledove on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:31:43 PM AEST
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A very cute write. I love the pics. also.
Gentledove |
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Re: in the woods
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by critterhideaway on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:19:44 AM AEST
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| How sweet this is. Wonder if I have any of these creatures in my woods? I hope so |
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Re: in the woods
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by pvd on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:50:43 PM AEST
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Poems like this put a smile on my face. We all need a little magic. Very nice piece.
PVD |
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Re: in the woods
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by Sagacious on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:42:51 AM AEST
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| No one does rhyming verse better than you--and a well-executed flight of whimsy may tell even more about a person than a somber meditation. This poem makes me think of our ancestors, such small beings in a beautiful though intimidating landscape. They tamed that wilderness (and their fears) in no small part through their folklore, which gave human-like attributes to the natural world of their experience. And who's to say they were wrong? Many have suggested that it is we, amid our modern conveniences, who are blind to the grander reality of things. I suspect they are right. Thank you, as always, for your ever-thoughtful verse. Blissfully, -KAC- |
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 11:25:35 PM AEST
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What a wonderful little poem.........
I love it.....
hugs |
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:08:09 AM AEST
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Luv your graphics aand this one gave me a smile too.
Thanks Nessa.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: in the woods
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:11:52 AM AEST
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Something different she says, hmm You certainly have neighbours which make me envious, lol they sound like fun.
Awesome write |
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Re: in the woods
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by Twisterchaser on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:34:05 PM AEST
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A wonderful, lite hearted poem..I smile indeed.
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Re: in the woods
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:57:32 PM AEST
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Reminds me of my fairytales when I was a child. Another great write from you Nessa. :)
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Re: in the woods
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by Archie on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:45:35 AM AEST
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| As always your poems are very refreshing. This one is actually quite cute. |
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:34:25 AM AEST
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I hear ya friend. There's nothing like living in the woods amongst the creature big, and small.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: in the woods
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by arden on
Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 04:19:14 PM AEST
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this was really cute nes.
it brought a much needed smile to my face.
it was beautiful. loved this write girl.
5 stars
Becky |
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Re: in the woods
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:51:44 PM AEST
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| Oh Nessa, can I come see them? This was cute. I loved it. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: in the woods
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by colinb on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2014 @ 02:25:57 AM AEST
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| wonderfully written |
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