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Fake
Contributed by
jt
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:25:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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She never felt so good
She never wanted more
Still willing through it all
Bleeding, chained to the floor
Untouched by what’s inside
It didn’t hurt before
And laughing at the world
Beginning to explore
Falling into herself
Fighting in her own war
And holding out her heart
Not knowing what its for
Feeding upon the game
Rotten right to the core
Still standing on the edge
What have you got in store
She never fell so hard
Never such a mistake
Unwilling to this time
Inside something will break
This time the war was lost
There’s nothing you can take
Still laughing at this world
Because this world is fake
The chains begin to fade
The walls begin to flake
And sitting in the dark
Pain turns to a dull ache
And coming back to life
This fear that she will make
Can only fly from her
Leaving me in its wake
Copyright ©
jt
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2004-07-19 07:25:48]
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Re: Fake
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by pixie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:27:26 AM AEST
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powerful and a captivating write,
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Re: Fake
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:11:04 AM AEST
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wow.... i would agree.... powerful says it all.
you've created a masterpeice. it's really a stunning write.
"holding out her heart/ Not knowing what it's for" was genius i think.
Ellen |
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