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Simple Dreams (pleaz comment)
Contributed by
IncoherentGirl
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:37:25 AM in AEST
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I'm happy
I'm care free
I don't wanna die
My mommy loves me
We don't fight
Our house isn't World War 3
My daddy loves me
He doesn't hate me anymore and he's there for me when I need him
He doesn't do drugs and doesn't drink
My world is perfect and serene
I could never wish for anything more
But I wish this wasn't a lie that it was my life
But it's not reality it's just one of my
Simple Dreams
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IncoherentGirl
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2004-07-19 10:37:25]
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Re: Simple Dreams (pleaz comment)
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by Monkeybones99 on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:22:12 AM AEST
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| I think this is a good poem it kind of reminds me of my years growing up with a dad addicted to drugs and at times very volient. |
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Re: Simple Dreams (pleaz comment)
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:18:07 PM AEST
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| dreams can be so amazing but as you wake the dissapointment of realizing it was only a dream is madding emotinal write im sorry but hang in there hun all good things must come to an end but but all bad things must end to |
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Re: Simple Dreams (pleaz comment)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:02:53 PM AEST
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I wrote a poem like this the other day, although of course, we're under totally different circumstances.
Here's hoping one of your simple dreams comes true one day.
Keep writing. |
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