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Depression
Contributed by
Monkeybones99
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:45:51 AM in AEST
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I walk thru this world
With and everlasting feeling of being empty
I've done what I thought would help me
Went for a stay at the hospital
Talked to a counslor until I was blue
Took the medicine the said would help me manage
Took the drugs to try and help me forget
Cut myself so I could feel something
Took to many pills, had my stomach pumped
Yet it all only makes it feel good I mean differnt for alittle while
Now I feel the darkness creeping in again
Feel the pain starting to consume my soul
Starting to think I'm crazy in my head
I want to yell at the top of my lungs
Want to run and run and never stop
Dig a hole and crawl inside wanting to find a place to hide
But this depression is so damn overwhelming
All I can mange is a small moan from within
Barely being able to roll out of bed
So I walk thru this world quiet and alone
Feeling so empty and chilled to the bone.
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2004-07-19 11:45:51]
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Re: Depression
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by pixie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:49:09 AM AEST
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Awwww *hugs you* you are not alone, this poem will touch alot of people as they will be able to relate to your words and sadness, me being one of them, thnaks for sharing, if youm ever need a friend, I am but a click away :)
great write
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Re: Depression
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:16:33 PM AEST
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this is brilliant with a very powerful message behind it.
the flow of things doesn't matter for me much. i'm only bothered about the contents of the poem.
i think that this is a really good piece! |
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Re: Depression
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by DragonLuvSong on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:23:21 PM AEST
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| i think that you expressed yourself really well. and i think that it does have structure becuase it is a story. and showing your emotions will touch other people who maybe feel the same as you do. i think it is a great write. |
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