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unfulfilled and cold
Contributed by
kammie
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:36:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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no light in my eyes
shapeless shadows in dark skies
my body unfulfilled and cold
a person once bold
lying on my bed
thinking through all the ***** in my head
thinking deeply of you
and of what we used to do
on lively night yet cold and dark
you held me but left not a mark
your hand on me mine on you
in our own world just us two
at night we were as one
then morning dreams of being one gone
now my world shattered
my head battered
i am unfulfilled and cold
its what the stars had fore told
it was only for a short while we could be
we both enjoyed our time i can see
now my head free of some stuff
i feel better just enough
my world is slowly reappearing
just one pane of glass missing
to remind me of us lying here, kissing
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2004-07-19 12:36:09]
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Re: unfulfilled and cold
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by pixie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:39:52 PM AEST
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awwww *hugs you* this is so emotional, but you have written it so beautifully Kammie,
time is a great healer,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: unfulfilled and cold
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:52:47 PM AEST
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iya hun aw this is really boss!
thanks for ya comment
i wish dying was that peacefull coz i would be dead by now...:)
this reminds me off loads off ppl
ur boss yano
an ur a boss m8
we can go out on saturday then yay
luv ya hun xxx
bye xxx
(take care c u soon!) |
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Re: unfulfilled and cold
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:56:09 PM AEST
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| emotonal write i feel the sam about a past love of mine |
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