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goodbye
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:40:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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goodbye is just a word explaining how i say it is in words i love you can be said and memories of it come flooding back so there is no need to explain love but goodbye... yes goodbye is harder,more difficult no-one says goodbye before their ready so there's no need to say it but in my case i do you see im sick of being, sick and tired of waiting for my health to re-new my spirit to be full the cancer to be cured i feel like my mind is old and tired but when i look at my reflection i havent aged a minute,a day,a month,a year... i want to die im tired im lonely iam the ever lasting the emortal the light lingering in the dark i lay awake ungulfing the dusty air oxygen tastes toxic surging through my body killing me but not quite finishing the job ....i dont think i ever will actually die im all alone in this world nothing surviving except one the night comes,even though it seemd dark anyway and for the first time i feel tired and sleepy i close my eyes and i see...see the light once again and i remember...my first sight,my first words,my first steps the first glimpse of the outside world it all comes flooding back,like love and i breathe in one last time and the air tastes fresh and fills me with life and i feel alive and ready to fade i can feel my spirit leaving i can feel the darkness fading and the light guiding me and i can feel me...actually...dying goodbye....
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Re: goodbye
(User Rating: 1 ) by kammie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:47:13 PM AEST (User
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go hannah it was totally kool is that what it really is to die it sounds peaceful ne way !!
bye hannah i mite cum an nok 4 ya on saturday xxxxxxxx |
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Re: goodbye
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hannah_Heaven on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:04:46 PM AEST (User
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ello ppl...please read my poems
just out of interest how old do u have to be on here?im 13 erm is that too young:S????
ok thanks ne way xxxx |
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