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unworthy
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:26:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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pity
is one of the words i cannot understand
i pity
but do not realise it
my whole life
ive felt sorry for me
but ive just realised
just discovered
that this world has more people
than just me
with their own problems
far worse than mine
someone opened my eyes
i think it was a powerful being shinning through 'you'
my problems dont consist with me
my family
let them be...
they may upset me
argue back..
abuse me with words
a slut
a *****
an person unworthy of living
then why dont they let me die
i wont be shallow
im sorry to each and every person
im sorry really truely
for my selfish actions
my pittyless ways
the ony pity is for me...iam so unworthy of living
bye bye
i punished my skin
no pity will fill my eyes
or heart
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Re: unworthy
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:37:22 PM AEST
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| dammit i wont pity but i will try to get thru to you you that was a powerful poem but everyone has a place if every person started saying there are other people out there then people would be knoked off one by one i guess i cant get to upset because i used to feel the same wya and i stilll stuggle w/ it but hun please take what i have said to heart |
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Re: unworthy
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by white_rain_angel on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 04:14:16 PM AEST
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You don't know me & i don't know you. But i just want to tell you that don't kill yourself because other's say things or put you down, they only do that to make themselves feel better, yes we all have problems, but if you need someone to be there for you, i will, i would hate to loose another person. So i hope you know that if you need a friend, im here. please take what i said to heart
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