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Darling
Contributed by
emospaztic
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:31:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I lie in a dimly-lit room
and cry to the heavens
for you.
For you,
my darling,
crawl and seep
under doorways
of foresaken
dungeons
and see.
And you see things
that should never be seen
or remembered
or forgotten.
You shrivel into nothingness
and depart.
Depart only
to crawl and to seep
into the next
dungeon.
Now you have discovered
my unwavering dungeon.
So, here I lie in a dimly-lit room
and cry to the heavens
for you, my darling.
Copyright ©
emospaztic
... [
2004-07-19 13:31:15]
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Re: Darling
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:32:05 PM AEST
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| good write!! |
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Re: Darling
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 11:02:35 PM AEST
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| amazing write. i loved this. |
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Re: Darling
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:26:02 PM AEST
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This one jus grabs one by the heart and rips it out!
Very powerfull!
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Darling
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by Binky on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 02:57:10 PM AEST
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Very well written! Good work.
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