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My Tongue
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:35:30 PM in AEST
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She was so pretty, red hair, petite
She came to my room said she needed sleep
And so I welcomed her into my bed
Instead of sleep, I woke her up instead
Smooth, was her skin, porceline white
Soft, was her body, perfectly right
I felt her breath, licked her lips
I knelt down before her & held her hips
And I watched as her eyes began to shine
I tasted, savored her like wine
I felt her as she began to tremble
And thought "how sweet, how simple"
The pleasures given just by my tongue
Can make a total stranger come undone
Copyright ©
emeraldeyes
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2004-07-19 13:35:30]
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Re: My Tongue
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by brokensoul on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 01:38:27 PM AEST
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Re: My Tongue
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by Dawny on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 03:40:11 PM AEST
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Wow, very sensual....filled with desire, and very well written
Love Dawny xx |
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Re: My Tongue
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by arden on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:06:27 AM AEST
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*closes mouth*
Wow.... never read a poem about oral before.. i Like it lol :D
great flow and very steamy.
nice work.
5 stars
Arden |
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