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Ladies in Waiting
Contributed by
pvd
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Outside the bar
sixteen and seventeen
year-old princesses
dress in tank tops,
tie-dyed tee-shirts,
cut denim shorts,
and Indian skirts,
smoking cigarettes
and drinking
from wine sacks
and bottles of Jack.
They moon-dance under
the neon lights
and dream of bankers
and brokers
driving white
Corvettes
to carry them away,
but tonight they settle
for black leather
bikers on Harleys.
They are the wild flowers
that fill empty spaces.
Copyright ©
pvd
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2004-07-19 19:54:30]
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Re: Ladies in Waiting
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 07:51:58 AM AEST
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The empty spaces of passing attention . . . or otherwise. Am left in a muse, as usual with your work.
Well done.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Ladies in Waiting
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by Cole_Crowe on
Tuesday, 15th November 2011 @ 03:43:27 AM AEST
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They are the wild flowers that can make a weed feel like rose.
Came here from the least read poems tab, I love an underdog. You should be proud, popular opinion is almost always wrong. Pleasantly surprised. I like it. Right in my wheelhouse. |
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