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Cleansing Rain
Contributed by
MLCstar
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 08:47:52 PM in AEST
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Rain pours gently down
On those with widely open arms.
Why do some avoid its kisses?
Will it wash them all away?
They cry and run when they hear thunder.
Never do they stand their ground.
But there are those who love the rain,
For then they are truly clean.
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Re: Cleansing Rain
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by blueheart on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:09:31 PM AEST
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| I've never been much of a nature person, but lately I seem to be enthralled by the glory of nature. I liked your poem, I too wrote a poem about the rain as well recently. A very true write. |
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Re: Cleansing Rain
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:34:21 PM AEST
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i love to walk in the rain, jump in puddles, sing and dance like a fool in the rain.
does that mean i am ok?
great write
the voice
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Re: Cleansing Rain
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:41:05 PM AEST
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Oh,how you got me smiling !!! You got me wishing it was raining right now...You truly captured the beauty and comfort that rain can bring to someone's eyes and heart,such as mine and yours =).Wonderfully done,
PumpkinPie |
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Re: Cleansing Rain
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:03:31 AM AEST
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This poem is a wonderful little poem. Growing up and running from the rain is a sad loss of our youth. Wish we kept more of the "little kid" inside of us.
J~ |
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Re: Cleansing Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:06:23 AM AEST
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so beautiful! id rather have rain than sun anytime, lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Cleansing Rain
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by evilfairy on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:10:31 AM AEST
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| nice. i love the rain and consider it cleansing aswell |
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Re: Cleansing Rain
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:25:15 AM AEST
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Ohhh YAY!!! I love this poem! I'm so glad there are others out there that love the rain like me. This poem is so cool. Bravo! Encore!!
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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