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She can write anything
Contributed by
Daniella
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:43:24 PM in AEST
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Can the cherries that line your lips
Really taste as sweet as this?
Illusions always feel nice for a litte while
But leave a bad taste in your mouth
And the snow wants to be the rain so it can fall a
little faster
If you don't believe me just ask her
The snow, she is always sincere when her
complexion is completely clear
And would you like to know what's behind these
blue doors?
Then get on all fours love and show me what you
can do love, love, love and the answer could be
yours babe
But who knows...the truth may fade
And does that chain hold the key to your moods?
Because if they do change then maybe I can
rearrange them to fit my liking while love is out
writing
Can she write anything?
She knows nothing of anything except broken
hearts, lies and maybe a few easy ways to make you
cry
And I won't lie like she does
Broken hearts can cause you to die
And the amber in the eye of the storm flies down
down down
Around
Around
Around me
Can it consume this
In just one thunderous kiss?
And to this kind of poison the Oleander bows down
Down
Down
Way down
And kisses the ground
The amber eye touches
Instead of keeping this
I'll just bury it beneath the pile of gold dust
I've already attained
For which I'm openly ashamed
Bury it under me
So when I come to the edge of this grave
I can hear those bells play
Gloria
At the top of their lungs
Instead of keeping this
I'll blow it one goodbye kiss
As I sing, sing, sing
She really can write anything
Copyright ©
Daniella
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2004-07-19 21:43:24]
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Re: She can write anything
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:03:53 PM AEST
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Hey Daniella,
Welcome to YPDC... this is awesome, I enjoyed it very much thanks for sharing.
p.s. nice name ya got there... ;) you make the Daniel(l)as of the world proud... hehe |
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Re: She can write anything
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by darkplaidbabe on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:09:17 PM AEST
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| i like this poem very much. It flows nicely and its well written. i liked the analogies. |
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Re: She can write anything
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:39:41 AM AEST
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I really liked this poem.
Very interesting concept... about how everything wants to be something else.
I dont' think everyone would be able to put thoghts like that so lucidly and express them as well as you have. |
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Re: She can write anything
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:42:56 AM AEST
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Hello and a warm welcome to ypdc. I was quite impressed with your poem.
Very unique in your writing style about a topic that everyone can relate to.
Wow was it good! You are going to do great here!
Kie : ) |
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Re: She can write anything
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 08:52:37 AM AEST
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| Interesting process and flow - I enjoyed this - look forward to more - |
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