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Two Poets
Contributed by
merry
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Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:47:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Rustle of silken thought entwined
Our hearts grow ever near
If I could but touch your hand
See the look in your eye
Yet we are bound by endless disruption
To keep us far and away
Follow trails of ink stained fingers
We press on in our accomplishments
Finding depth within the word
Disparity does not escape us
Still we share the same misery
In loves scratchy cloak of despair
Ill suited to our temperament
Seeking fire within the heart
Embers languish without air
Await fair winds to breathe us alive again
While words declare we are sovereign lovers
Antiquity runs through our veins like blood
We have been here before.to find each other
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-07-19 21:47:47]
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Re: Two Poets
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 09:59:03 PM AEST
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Oh, Merry --- beautiful! Our styles are a bit different... but *sigh* it seems we think a lot alike. I love how you've expressed it here - it feels rather familiar and quite understandable. It is, very much so, even bigger than the words on the page.
For the record - you had me with the title,
SNM |
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Re: Two Poets
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:20:31 PM AEST
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oooo! i love this whole poem from title to last line, and this,"Await fair winds to breathe us alive again" ohh! i dont believe 'beautiful' will do, nope, it is far more! your talent shines here sis, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Two Poets
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by blueheart on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:44:38 PM AEST
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| This is a splendid piece. Your talent shines within the beautifully crafted words. Very very nice. |
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Re: Two Poets
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:46:22 PM AEST
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I believe in the reincarnation relationships.
This is beautiful. Poetic souls find each other and feel they have been sewn together like Siamese twins. Tear them apart and they function in a sort of parallel universe until time or fate makes a place for them.
You always say it so well.
Stitch |
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