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Dying Affection
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:03:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dying Affection
I can't see the person
Who I thought I knew
I can't see through
The lies I hold true
I can't see you
I lost you
This is my dying affection
For everything
The world ever offered me
Nothing but pain and misery
This is my dying affection
For everything
You ever did offer me
Nothing but pain and misery
This is the ending
Of everything
You killed what was inside
All the feelings that reside
You killed me every time
That you told me a lie
Take this dying affection
It's killing me inside
My affection died
As I saw through the lies
My affection died
When I saw who you were
Someone killing me inside
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Re: Dying Affection
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by KurdtBeantheWIKKED on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 10:09:39 PM AEST
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Wow, whoever they are
they are defenetly not worth all this pain
I loved it, great write
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Re: Dying Affection
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:45:23 AM AEST
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This is really good...reminds me of how my bf feels about his life b4 me...great job
please comment on my work too
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Re: Dying Affection
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:42:36 PM AEST
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| Do you know of dying affection Jennifer..Perhaps it is the death if it that makes it better..Another piece to add to the group of perfection you always seem to post.. |
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