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mirrors once more
Contributed by
whoelse
on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 11:26:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What is this face in front of me?
Unknown but so familiar
What's it got to do with me?
Two eyes turn red when I cry
My tears will stain the mirror,
My breath will fog the glass.
I'll sit here for a lifetime
My reflection fades atlast.
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whoelse
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Re: mirrors once more
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:33:36 AM AEST
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So short, and sad...i can relate...
please comment on my work too
Summer |
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Re: mirrors once more
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:44:10 AM AEST
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Well-written.
Very simple, and yet has depth. |
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Re: mirrors once more
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by Sinful_Misery on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:48:59 AM AEST
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| short, too the point, and has a good meaning, awesome poem :) |
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Re: mirrors once more
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:31:32 AM AEST
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~:*wow*:~ hugs n' love nessa
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Re: mirrors once more
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:36:35 AM AEST
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| Well written..venkat |
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Re: mirrors once more
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:32:57 PM AEST
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Short but very well-written...i like it alot
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears
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