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It just takes a moment...
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:37:23 AM in AEST
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It just takes a moment
And you fall with a crash
You begin your descent
Down to the cinders and the ash
It just takes one look
And you feel yourself slipping
You can feel where the hook
Suspending you has started tipping
And your world of light
Shutters and dims to dark
And no matter how you try to ignite
You cant get back even a spark
Now youre perpetually cold
When once you eternally burned
And you were confident and bold
But now the tables have turned
And deep inside there is a misery
That wasnt there yesterday
And the feelings that you feel are scary
And they eat at you with decay
Then when you look outside
To where the others exist
You and reality collide -
Theres more to life yet you resist
And everyone watches over you
To see how low you will crawl
Oh if they only knew
How you were beyond it all
Yes, it just takes a moment
And everything falls to the ground
One moment, an inconsequential event
And youre buried so deep youll never be found
MW 20.07.04
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Re: It just takes a moment...
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:50:31 AM AEST
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What to say I don't know but I enjoyed its read
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Re: It just takes a moment...
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:12:33 AM AEST
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aw its v deep and sad, i hope your friend sees the light soon.
love hayleyx |
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Re: It just takes a moment...
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:19:08 AM AEST
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very touhcing and deep write Evilfairy... I always love your reads, I am sorry for your friends pain and suffering... *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: It just takes a moment...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:30:49 PM AEST
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I feel for you and your friend. It is so difficult to stand by and watch a dear friend on a road to destruction and be able to do nothing but be there in case they come up for air. We can only hope your friends see the horrific end waiting if they don't.
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Re: It just takes a moment...
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 06:05:57 AM AEST
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very thought provoking write.
luv, huggs,
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