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Broken Trust
Contributed by
sarah_may
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 11:59:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Broken Trust 7/19/04
Foolish, yes, Im feelin foolish,
Cause I believed that it would last
That your past was still your past.
You wouldnt betray me like you did to her.
But I was wrong thats all I know for sure
Chorus:
Betrayal is the name of your game,
Lies were the only thing that stayed the same.
Trust is gone forever more.
Its over nowGotta pick myself up off the floor.
Sleepless nights are over now.
This crying game is finally through.
Time to move on and to start anew.
You cant bring me down any more,
Its time for me to learn to soar
Chorus:
Betrayal is the name of your game,
Lies were the only thing that stayed the same.
Trust is gone forever more.
Its over nowGonna pick myself up off the floor.
Copyright ©
sarah_may
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2004-07-20 11:59:46]
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Re: Broken Trust
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:03:10 PM AEST
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awwww I am sorry that this has happened to you hun *hugs you* to be betryaed is not something that I have dealt with in my life, but I can imagine how muhc it hurts, I hope that one day you will be able to find a man who is worthy of your love and care....
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Broken Trust
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:18:48 PM AEST
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| I can relate, well written. |
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Re: Broken Trust
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:29:37 PM AEST
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| interesting work..I liked it though,Maybe better to hear you sing it though....... |
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Re: Broken Trust
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by fairietears on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 12:58:03 PM AEST
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| Everyone who has been on the floor themselves know this pain! It will heal. Love yourself always! |
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Re: Broken Trust
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by Jacoba on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:25:47 PM AEST
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Great song...well, the lyrics anyway...I'm sorry you feel so bad, but time heals all wounds. Very great writing.
Jacoba |
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Re: Broken Trust
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by freespirit on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:24:07 PM AEST
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Well done but I think you have to make a few changes if you want it to be a song like
betrayal it the game you play
your lies they stay the same
trust is gone for ever more
like that hope you dont mind i said that you may some day be a song wtiter good luck
god bless freespirit |
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