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stay ........or go
Contributed by
kammie
on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:44:02 PM in AEST
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why am i tortured so?
why cant you stay or go?
you come so close
then dissapear
so why come so near?
within my view
within my sight
i dream of you every night
why back off ?
go away?
you know i need you day to day
stay or go?
decide
but think of me
i need you you know i do
need to look at you
your face carved by
delicate angel hands
your eyes jewl like
blue and big,sapphire
hugs as gentle as clouds
hands as soft as babys
i need you to show me life
and mostly
to show me love
.....
Copyright ©
kammie
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2004-07-20 13:44:02]
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Re: stay ........or go
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:47:36 PM AEST
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I can feel your frustation in This verse. You have expressed your emotions beautifully . Excellent write.
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Re: stay ........or go
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by brokensoul on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:47:50 PM AEST
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| touching write i know how you feel the guy im into does the same one minute i will be all snuggled up in his arms then the next its just like hes all the hellwith u ashley |
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Re: stay ........or go
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:53:03 PM AEST
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| this is so delicate and expressive... everyones been in this situation before. so many people can relate to these its nice to hear it describe so gently |
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Re: stay ........or go
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:49:37 PM AEST
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| Hey, hey, it goes both ways, darling. We're all in this together, boys and girls alike. Ain't it fun? |
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Re: stay ........or go
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by TwistedCage on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:43:56 PM AEST
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Good write, and great foundation. Touch it up a bit, and it could be a super read...
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