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Have or Love?
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 01:51:34 PM in AEST
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What do u do when the one you love
Isnt the one your with
I love him but hes not with me
He loves me but I dont love him
I know this sounds confusing
But if you only knew
The pain that this has caused me
Its eating me alive
So now Im left alone to think
I dont know what to do
Should I leave the one Im with
To be with the one I love
I feel as though Im lying
To him and to myself
God I wish I knew the answer
I just need some help
But I know I need
To make this decision on my own
But Im just so afraid
That Ill decide wrong
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CrimsonTears
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2004-07-20 13:51:34]
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Re: Have or Love?
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by emeraldeyes on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 02:32:57 PM AEST
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| this is a very good poem about love and confusion...good job...on the help side of it...I know from experience that if one person isn't happy in a relationship, noone will be. There will eventually be too much tension & questions, regrets & wishes, all sorts of things. I think you'd end up splitting up and quite honestly, why keep wasting time?? I know it's hard to let go sometimes, but sometimes it's the ONLY way to find happiness...for everyone involved...i'll quit preaching now. keep writing. |
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Re: Have or Love?
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by Heartfilledblood on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:34:45 AM AEST
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You should follow your heart. What makes you more happy should be your ultimate decision. Dont keep yourself bound to anything that your not emotionally attached too. If you love someone else be with him he will make you more happy than anyone else.
Very good poem I liked it a lot.
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Re: Have or Love?
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by TwistedCage on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 05:49:39 PM AEST
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The last stanza needs a little work, but I liked it overall...
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Re: Have or Love?
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by PieceOfABrokenSoul on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 09:46:02 PM AEST
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| This I realy like, it's how I'd imagine my ex felt when she was going out with both I and another guy named Mike |
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