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Sinking
Contributed by
dirtyfool
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 04:30:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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No helping hand,
To pull you on land,
Left to drown in sorrow,
I'll be gone by tomorrow,
The waters of darkness have covered me,
Pleae just set me free,
I'm sinking fast,
I can not last,
I'm screaming out to you,
Til my face turns blue,
But no one hears,
No one sees the tears,
I'm falling deeper,
What little life is left,
My last moment is here,
I have nothing to fear,
Goodbye,
Today I die
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2004-07-20 16:30:44]
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Re: Sinking
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by screwup on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 05:21:21 PM AEST
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| this is a great write...I can relate exactly. |
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Re: Sinking
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by Dawny on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:31:39 AM AEST
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Powerful and moving, hope the last line is fictional.
Love Dawny xx |
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Re: Sinking
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:23:44 AM AEST
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How many of us have felt like this at one stage or another. Very sad sentiments but true to so many people. Very well writen. I hope you are over the worst of it and will be able to move on.
Corinna |
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