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Lost Sister
Contributed by
Am
on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 05:41:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Her older sister is her hero
Is her mentor
Is her friend
Little did she know,
The happiness
Was about to end
She came home
To tell her sister
About her junior high bore
She walked up the stairs
Turned to the left
And saw a note on the door
She read the note
And just collapsed
A piece of her was dead
Every emotion you could think of
Ran wild..
In her head
The words stung her like a new wound
I had to go, but I want you to know,
I love you
She read the note over and over
But the thought raced through her mind
This cant be true!
The pain in her sisters eyes
She was too blind
To see
Was now the reason
Her sister had been
Set free
A family torn apart
Is the harsh reality she now
Needs to face
But a day without her sister
Sends all of her emotions
Into space
Her older sister WAS her hero
WAS her mentor
WAS her friend
Copyright ©
Am
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2004-07-20 17:41:56]
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Re: Lost Sister
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by SWAYLOS on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:06:11 PM AEST
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I THINK THAT REALLY RELATES TO WHAT
THE WORLD IS COMING TO. SUICIDE, MURDER, DRUGS, AND GAYS.
...JUST KEEP YO HEAD UP SISTA
....NICE POEM
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Re: Lost Sister
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 06:06:27 PM AEST
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| an extreamly beautiful and poiniont poem. damn well done. i can only hope its not based on personal exsperience? |
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Re: Lost Sister
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:36:20 PM AEST
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If this poem is true I feel so sad.Your writing watered my eyes.Fights anger and hate I despise.You did a good job writing this and I hope you write more.
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