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Plea to God
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 10:16:54 PM in AEST
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It's hard to wake up
Why am i here?
What did i do?
Why are you putting me through this punishment?
Will you take me back?
I no longer wish to be here
This is hell
But then again
Its only life
How hard is it to take
My luck
I will be thrown back
But god i don't want to go back
I want to be dead
I want to be back in your hands
I'm tired of crying
I want to be dieing
Please if i try take me back
Don't make me live this life
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Re: Plea to God
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 05:59:28 PM AEST
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This is a very very sad, and yet powerful write I dont like the whole fact that you are wanting to die...and hopefully these arent your thoughts now...I would truly hate to lose a friend of your kind...your are one of my favorite people in life...I want you to know that...so please keep your head held high...and I will be on more...soon...so dont get into your habbits please...
much love,
Dani....
but again another great write...I loved it... |
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Re: Plea to God
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:04:36 AM AEST
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It's easy to die but hard to live.
Hang in there cause u r a great writer and there's plenty to write about.
I send u luv, huggs, smiles, peace, hope, joy,
emy |
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