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Your Words
Contributed by
hrpuffnstuff
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:32:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Mum how could you say
God has forgiven him???
Well thats ok then yippee!!!
Your words are daggers piercing my heart
Mum how could you say
You need forgiveness???
Um what exactly for???????????/
Your words are daggers piercing my heart
Mum how could you say
You offered him comfort??
Well as long as he is ok!!!!!!!!
Your words are daggers piercing my heart
Mum how could you say
Women throw themselves at him?????
So ITS not his fault!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your words are daggers piercing my heart
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Re: Your Words
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by Dawny on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 06:02:28 AM AEST
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Hmmmmmm, this does sound like she has crossed wires doesnt it.
Well written emotional poem
Love Dawny xx |
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Re: Your Words
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:27:04 AM AEST
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lots of emotion and very powerful well done.
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