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secret passion
Contributed by
princesspurty
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Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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across the ocean misty blue
dreams of passion are calling you
dreams of love and desire of your heart
wanting everything you need is a start
gravity lifts your eyes to mine, they meet
attraction begins, feelings of wild heat
talked, worked up a plan
met, gave on another a helping hand
vowed to spend another moment or two
love sharing a moment with you
blue skys are calling with a happy song
in my heart and arms is where you belong
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2002-10-27 12:45:00]
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Re: secret passion
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by norticus on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:33:50 PM AEST
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| This is sorta' cool. I think I'll give it a 3.4 on the Nortiscale. Is the helping hand a job? |
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Re: secret passion
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by ginsdance on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:50:26 PM AEST
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well... I liked it!!! I think this describes everything, very well... I like the starting of line 5... "gravity lifts..." and I think that the helping hand is helping each other through life. Great write!
Gin |
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Re: secret passion
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by princesspurty on
Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 07:26:36 AM AEST
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| a job? maybe for some, but the one for whom this was wrote about looks at it as a prize, thanks for the post though |
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