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A Journey To Oz
Contributed by
Baronhawk
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:27:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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A journey once did they undertake
to the great Tower of Oz for what they did seek
to the great wizard as supplicant they would beseech
his aid in their quests for their dreams and destiny's wake
led by Nina a lady in icy white
the Ice Queen she was whose gaze could freeze a soul
off to search for the redemption that she knows
resides in these her charges within their separate plights
there was Sulin the doused firefly
who lost her spark her spontaneous gaiety
marroned forever in the dark and gloomy
less she finds again her light that's gone awry
dear Ling that crumpled butterfly
weighed down by cares she wallowed in the depths
burdened by concerns and by threats to her health
she lost her lustre her spirit's will have gone by
there was Lan the man of tin
made of metal a heart he has not
struggling to contain emotions and rust spots
he may very well be consigned to give in
there's Ghaus the old man winter
a man at the peak at the top of his life
with accomplishments aplenty to mark his past
what more in this world can reshine his veneer
joined by John that sullen rock of loss
weighed down in life he was awaiting to sink
there is no more in life that he so thinks
would give him cause to smile, cheer or applause
and also Chu that unhappy swallow
who among ducks shrouded her life an ugly hue
what is more for her to attend and to do
not to be in the crowd but to shine and glow
the beautiful Azleena the sad princess
whose life had chosen a sad fairy tale
so many unpleasantness her story would regale
leaving anyone with a sob and a tear no less
then at last there was Janice that hidden flower
a beauty asleep awaiting to bloom
shy and quiet but with potentials to groom
a lady of quality who sleeps in the mediocre
nine they were these walkers to Oz
a fellowship of friends marching to their dreams
a journey beyond hope beyond even a dare it seems
to seek for the sun in the lands of deathless frost.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2004-07-21 13:27:21]
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Re: A Journey To Oz
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 01:52:13 PM AEST
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You have introduced your characters well here. I am anxious to hear the tales of their adventures.
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Re: A Journey To Oz
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 02:30:53 PM AEST
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I feel that like most of us, what we need is inside us already. We just have to do some soul searching to dig it out. I know Lan to have a heart because it pours out in shining beauty in his art form.
Smiles and hugs,
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Re: A Journey To Oz
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:21:21 PM AEST
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you have a natural ability for poetry this is an exceptional piece.
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Re: A Journey To Oz
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:31:11 PM AEST
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You are a natural weaver of stories.
As I finished your poem I wondered which character was most like me. I don't know but I enjoyed a glimpse of every single one of them.
I hope you write a part II!
Kie |
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