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Your Shelter
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:33:24 PM in AEST
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When I look up at you
I see the sadness in your eyes
The pain I know that you must feel
Once no more reasons are left to try
I wish that you could fit in my hand
I'd shelter you from the wind
I'll be your shoulder if you need to cry
Your foundation built on sin
Through all of the heartbreak
I promise that I'll be here,
With me standing by your side
You'll have nothing left to fear
You have allways been amazing
So much more than I deserve
I'll try to show you every day
How much you are worth
Copyright ©
_Raspberry_
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2004-07-21 16:33:24]
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Re: Your Shelter
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 04:53:21 PM AEST
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Wow!....very impressive!...the compassion and love in this verse is expressed beautifully...I love this.
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Re: Your Shelter
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:44:16 PM AEST
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genuine and beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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