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Sometimes
Contributed by
Brenda
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Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
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Sometimes I think I like the world
other times I think I don't
One day I'll feel like getting up
the next day I simply won't
Sometimes I think of days gone by
other times I think of now
sometimes I think of things to come
sometimes I wonder how
Sometimes I think the past was better
when life was simple and less complicated
sometimes I wish I'd went that way
other times I wish I'd waited
Sometimes I miss the way things were
Other times I just don't care
I long for things unchanging
Somethings I just can't bear
Somedays make me wonder
just what the future holds
It's those days I dread
the uncertainty that unfolds
Sometimes I really think the world
will somehow be alright
Other times I lie awake and worry
and toss and turn all night
Copyright ©
Brenda
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2002-10-27 13:30:00]
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Re: Sometimes
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by ginsdance on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:38:27 PM AEST
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Hey, we only worry about things, and think on days that end in "y" right??? ;)
Great write!!!
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Re: Sometimes
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:38:50 PM AEST
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| WELL SAID! I'M SURE A LOT OF US FEEL THIS WAY! GREAT RIGHT.CHRISTINA |
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Re: Sometimes
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by norticus on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 01:40:27 PM AEST
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Yeah. You hit it with this one. I'm giving it a 5 on the Nortiscale. It had a good tempo, nice English and heavy on truth. You're talented.
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Re: Sometimes
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 03:11:38 PM AEST
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| Hey, Crissy Lee. Ronald from Malaysia here again. Love to read your latest poem here. What you've written is really very true for us human. Overall : 5/5 |
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Re: Sometimes
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 03:15:03 PM AEST
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| Oppss..! Sorry, you're not Crissy.... Sorry got mistaken because was reading her poem before reading yours. Brenda, your poem is great! |
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