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Your Last Word
Contributed by
MaRyDoNtUwAnNa
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 07:22:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I feel so unhappy
I lost the best friend
That i could ever have
he was my everything
i loved him so
but its to late now
i had done it to myself
for i have let him go
we've shared the years
with a lot of memories
each day i go back thinking
about them
Now all my days
are filled in tears
these changes i wish i could
go back
we all grow up and realize people
do go through changes
but in my eyes
i know it took me so long
to see your face way it looked
when you said your last word to me
"goodbye"
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MaRyDoNtUwAnNa
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2004-07-21 19:22:49]
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Re: Your Last Word
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by hrpuffnstuff on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:11:29 AM AEST
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aw that.s so sad, good luck in the future
great expressive write
love hayleyxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: Your Last Word
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:13:02 AM AEST
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This was very expressive of how you felt.
Very nicely done.
Maybe someday you can make whatever up to him.
Good luck to you. |
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