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crushed
Contributed by
Shadow
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:13:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My heart lies on the floor
Crushed between the shut door
Crushed and hurt at once I bled
Now all I see is red
In vengeance name I bring froth hell
Come forth hate and Ring your bell!
Lead my hand to his heart
Let his soul from this world depart
Let my tears grace his cheek
Leave words of love to the meek!
Let my fire consume my blade
Let the life from his cheeks fade!
Bless my soul O darkened death
May the lord forgive my theft.
Dry my eyes with you wing
Let your sword bring forth its sting.
Let my die with my deed
This is all that I will plead.
My soul is yours when my war does end
May my lover know its love I send .
Goodbye my heart, goodbye my eyes
May god protect you from his lies.
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Shadow
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2004-07-21 21:13:26]
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Re: crushed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:36:31 PM AEST
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well..this certainly is angry. let it out, just let it all out...in poem form that is. lol.
acy |
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Re: crushed
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:59:20 PM AEST
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I found this to be more dark than angry but emotional nontheless.
Great write, I liked the flow of words. |
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Re: crushed
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by RavenShadows on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:53:12 PM AEST
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| All I can say is...well.. WOW |
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Re: crushed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:17:47 AM AEST
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Bless my soul O darkened death
May the lord forgive my theft.
Dry my eyes with you wing
Let your sword bring forth its sting.
nice one! this verse in particular, excellent poetry.
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Re: crushed
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:56:28 PM AEST
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Very angry. But it was good, filled with a lot of emotion. I hope to see more great work from you in the future.
Love N Stuff
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