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Torn Apart
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 10:54:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Torn Apart
I've hurt you
And the world
I hurt whoever I love
I'm never good enough
For the world
Nothing I do is right
Everything in a different light
Maybe I should die
Living is a constant fight
I'm always losing in spite
Of how hard I try
I've hurt myself
More than you can know
I keep it locked away
For no one to see
Yet they see in my eyes
That pain is all I have inside
I've tried to be
I tried to see
Myself in a different light
It causes me pain inside
When I believed the lies
I tried so hard to deny
My pain is not lost
It's all I ever cause
I'm being torn apart
My fault from the start
I hurt you more
Than I ever have before
Only pain was felt
Because I was myself
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Re: Torn Apart
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:02:45 PM AEST
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your poetry expresses what many feel out there...you have talent using your words
acy |
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Re: Torn Apart
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by RavenShadows on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 11:18:46 PM AEST
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| Very nice, great wording. |
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Re: Torn Apart
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by frostman56 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:00:04 AM AEST
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| Very touching. I can relate to your submission completely! |
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Re: Torn Apart
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by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:04:05 AM AEST
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It was very sad... But I enjoyed, I do share your feelings... You express them very well.. Keep it up
Love N Stuff
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Re: Torn Apart
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:09:04 AM AEST
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Wow...
I'm going to leave it at this was an excellent poem.
Incredible |
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Re: Torn Apart
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by pixie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:01:38 AM AEST
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touching write,
pixie xx |
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