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Warm Rain
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:03:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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62 degrees outside in the storm
The rain is cool like my skin
Laying, feeling every drop
I try not to give in
The thunder begins to rumble
I close my eyes and try to sleep
holding my arms around me
grasping all I have to keep
All I wanted was a warm rain.
The goose bumps are delightful
Though the shuddering will not cease
I have to find a path to warmth
but nothing near holds heat
The remaining warmth
quickly gets driven away
The cold droplets of sorrow
now reign in its place
All I wanted was a warm rain.
By now my breath shows my life
and my skin's gone more sickly pale
All sounds fade from my ears
The air grows surprisingly stale
I push myself back to lean against a tree
as my hand finds a cold slither of steel
The only familiar feeling
that proves my life is real
All I wanted was a warm rain
The coldness kisses my skin
The warmth is released and warms my mind
dripping onto my clothing a red plasma
The thickness sticks and heat abides
Covered in blood and finally warm
I lay against the tree and close my eyes
Falling asleep with finally a smile
As the life I know, now dies
I finally found my warm rain..
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Re: Warm Rain
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by nexxa on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:58:57 AM AEST
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Wow this is hard to respond to but for poetry's sake the only response I can give is very well written. On a personal note it is overwhelmingly sad and to know that so many ppl go thru the same thing it breaks my heart but that is what poetry is supposed to do right?
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Re: Warm Rain
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:29:51 PM AEST
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I liked how I was drawn into this poem as
well as the emotions portrayed in this poem,
emotions I don't quite have the correct word
for. In any case this was great... don't be
discouraged by the lack of comments since
your words speak volumes by themselves.
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Re: Warm Rain
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:20:12 AM AEST
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Wow.. You sound like me lol
This is amazing
it really deserve a 8 out of 5..
but 5 out of 5 will do
fantastic, you had me feeling
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