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Contributed by
nexxa
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:47:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The green leaves reach out to me as I walk by, thick trunks breath a sigh as if to empty them selves of my memories stored. Years have gone by they are older now and their wisdom surpasses mine. I breathe in air that is familiar and warm like the touch of my mothers hand along my hair. Security surrounds me here.
I walk upon the soft ground and with each step another sigh releases and I am flooded with fragrant remnants of my past. The hills have grown to mountains and my childish laughter abounds, as I had conquered them once before. The roads twist and turn with promise of adventure and I smile, as I know every bend. For this home that was my beginning is now my end.
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Re: Home
(User Rating: 1 ) by 61grahamj on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:16:08 AM AEST (User
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the images are very clear returning to the past and seeing the future
great imagery
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Re: Home
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:04:38 PM AEST (User
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I know these feelings so well as I returned to my childhood home after retirement and it filled me with such love and comfort to return. There truly is no place like home. It is my beginning, it shall be my end.
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Re: Home
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bruce on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:39:46 AM AEST (User
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how beautifully written and touching, keep up the good work |
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