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You
Contributed by
lilblkcat
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:23:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You make me feel twelve feet tall
Yet you make me feel oh so small
You tell me exactly what I want to hear
Yet you yell and scream in my ear
You hug and kiss me with such love
Yet you gave me such a hard shove
You say that I love you everyday
Yet you were the one to push me away
You say that you want to marry me
Yet you act as though you want to be free
You said you were sorry for all your mistakes
Yet you are the one who's causing me heartaches
You have to choose who to be
The side of you that hates or cherishes me
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lilblkcat
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2004-07-22 05:23:39]
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Re: You
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 06:22:39 AM AEST
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I like this very much, it is a mirror of ones self, and others. Excellent poem.
Thank you so very much for sharing. |
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Re: You
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:04:28 AM AEST
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This was perfectly expressed and had a nice flow to it.
It's not always that easy to chose... Sometimes both sides are quite real. |
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Re: You
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:28:19 PM AEST
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| Unfiltered truth. Nice job.--the Moth |
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