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Red River
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 12:55:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Swimming in a red river
For itself it has created
Afterthought will give wisdom
Just a little bit belated
Pain will help confusion
Right now it's just the feeling
The only thing it knows
To keep it's thoughts from reeling
Each time it's cut
It shrinks a little more
Each time it's cut
It feels better than before
Red river running
This blood is not a waste
It can show to you
A beautifully painted face
***
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_Raspberry_
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2004-07-22 12:55:47]
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Re: Red River
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by pixie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:08:47 PM AEST
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very grim write, sad and filled with emotion... great and dark write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Red River
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST
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beautifully expression of feelings, im more inclined to give you a *big hug* though, love nessa
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Re: Red River
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by SWAYLOS on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:44:59 PM AEST
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yo, that was fresh..
I like it....chek out my
new one..(Da Ghetto) |
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Re: Red River
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:36:01 PM AEST
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| I like the last four lines very much. Striking.--the Moth |
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Re: Red River
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by xemptydecemberx on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:06:52 PM AEST
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| very very very good poem. |
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Re: Red River
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 05:59:21 AM AEST
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Exceptionally well writen and composed, such graphic imagery, and so sad, darkness has new meaning....awesome poem.
Take care
Kindredblood_dragon |
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