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Our Black Cloud
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:05:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Our friend the big black cloud,
Is getting pleasure in hanging around,
Watching us as we struggle along,
Feeling like we dont really belong.
Things were right in our reach,
We almost arrived at our beach,
But someone went & moved the sun,
Deprived us of our lifetime of fun.
Our happiness has been a bit clouded,
The love we have has been surrounded,
By worry, pain & stress,
Things have all become a mess.
Life is hard & a real big pain,
It turfs out hurt again & again,
With you next to me I feel quite brave,
Ready to jump aboard the next wave.
But together we can chase the cloud away,
Begin to enjoy the light of the day,
The love we have will see us though,
I have found a true companion in you.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-22 13:05:07]
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Re: Our Black Cloud
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:38:16 PM AEST
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love the gentle mentions of the ocean here, may you always have sunshine my friend:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Our Black Cloud
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:15:53 PM AEST
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| Full of images and emotion, well done. Keep up the good work!--the Moth |
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Re: Our Black Cloud
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by _Raspberry_ on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:50:24 PM AEST
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| Very beautifull poem Pixie, your cloud seems to be lightening a little, I am very happy for you. Keep going! |
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Re: Our Black Cloud
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:18:24 PM AEST
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How intresting and yet I've been through it.
Hoping you will have sunshine always. |
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Re: Our Black Cloud
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:27:52 AM AEST
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Simply breathtaking pixie!...love abounds in this verse..awesome write.
WinterFawn |
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Re: Our Black Cloud
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by venkat on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 01:35:11 AM AEST
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| Aww.. my dear pixie..I wish you a sweet sunshine. venkat |
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Re: Our Black Cloud
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 02:58:18 AM AEST
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Reminded me Pixie of the cloud with the silver lining.....no matter howbad things may be become.......there is always something you can find to help remind you how blessed you are instead!
So sweet Pixie, with someone behind you like You.........who could ever miss!
Lovely
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