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Raindrops
Contributed by
Inevitable
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:21:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The Mirrors are cracked
the corners are stained
I walk the room
without feeling the rain.
Pain makes me numb
I breathe stale air
I walk each step
It's time I must bear
You fall on me like droplets of rain
I wanna float away
Piece by piece
I fall into this puzzle
Wondering when
I will become.
Copyright ©
Inevitable
... [
2004-07-22 13:21:07]
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Re: Raindrops
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by pixie on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:34:51 PM AEST
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awww *hugs you* sorry you are feeling like this....greay expression in your writing,
pixie xx |
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Re: Raindrops
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 02:31:46 PM AEST
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| I feel the same way every time I walk into a K-Mart.--the Moth |
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Re: Raindrops
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:07:02 AM AEST
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It isnt such a crappy life if you have the ability to put together work like this.
Keep writing and good luck
steve |
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Re: Raindrops
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 02:41:46 PM AEST
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beautifully expressive gentle quality to this poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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