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Painted Elegy.
Contributed by
backstreetdreamer
on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 04:47:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When the flame of love
lights up your life,
dreams become fact
and hearts burst into bloom,
entwined together
with the beautiful flowers
of souls as one.
When the flame of love dims
things seem subtly out of focus,
and that which was unsaid
is now unanswered.
When the flame of love dies
the light goes out
on so many things,
and life becomes a tragedy
and not an adventure.
Keep fanning the flame together
and it will never go out.
Copyright ©
backstreetdreamer
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2004-07-22 16:47:16]
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Re: Painted Elegy.
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:02:11 PM AEST
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I agree.....you DO have to fan the flames of love to keep it burning strong...and this verse says that so eloquently...very beautifully composed....
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Re: Painted Elegy.
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 05:11:49 PM AEST
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beautifully written and oh, so true:) hugs n' love nessa
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