|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Murder
Contributed by
DeathByLove
on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 08:54:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
someone must die,
not me,
for I payed my fee,
It'll be someone
who never sought or thought,
I pity thee,
for he is a she,
her soul must be pure,
and her heart must be full,
hahaha for she will face
the most tormention,
the most tormention
from the rest,
poor girl,
rest in peace,
until I return,
to take you from
your peaceful grave,
and put you with the rest,
in hell you shall remain,
for all eternity....
Copyright ©
DeathByLove
... [
2004-07-22 20:54:59]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Murder
(User Rating: 1 )
by ChinaRivera on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 05:29:54 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is sickening! what is wrong with you? stop scaring people! What kind of message is this! I don't even get the point of the whole thing! i don't know! perhaps im an idiot!
peace & love- china |
|
|
Re: Murder
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 11:51:23 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i gotta say i can concentrate hard enough to try and fathom any kinda meaning or anything from it, BUT i can read it, and ti flows and plays beautfiully, which, when ur as tired as i am, means its pretty good. so...good stuff =) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
