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These Crying Eyes
Contributed by
Colleen
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 09:00:39 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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My tears silently roll down my cheek
But I don't feel them anymore
How does someone like you make me so weak?
I've often wondered, how many tears can these eyes store?
You bring me down everyday
I see it in your eyes that you're not regretting
The pain you've inflicted within me will stay
While these eyes are crying
These weeping eyes look to you
Your eyes are so unkind
Forget about love, because it's not true
Will your eyes watch as I leave this life behind?
I'm not just an object to vent your frusterations on
Someone just lying themselves down for the slaughter
You know, I'm full of pros, not just cons
After all, I am your daughter
So lock me away into your heart
Don't just love me in your cold way
Come on, let's give it a new start
Tomorrow is another day
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-07-22 21:00:39]
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Re: These Crying Eyes
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by pixie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:46:21 AM AEST
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awwww Colleen, we expect our mothers to be there and always care for us, but for some such as yourself that is not reality *hugs you* I am sorry for your pain, maybe you should tell your mum just how *****ty she makes you feel? you are right Tomorrow is another day ... takecare
pixie xx
great write btw. |
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Re: These Crying Eyes
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by Rachelle on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 04:39:15 AM AEST
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| Awww, this poem reminds me a lot of my relationship with my mom. But even though it hurts not to have a loving bond with your mother doesn't mean you can't find happiness elsewhere. So just hang in there, you'll find a way to feel better again. I can tell this poem came from your heart. Nice job. |
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Re: These Crying Eyes
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by Sagacious on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 01:19:01 PM AEST
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| A depressed, confessional tone gives way to hopefulness by the end--a willingness to look beyond past differences, and to share the loving relationship you long for. This is Redemption at work, and the power behind your poem. Good show! -KAC- |
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