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Yellowstone (A Naga-Uta)
Contributed by
gentledove
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Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:01:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Smoldering cauldrens
of sulfuric gas rise up
Mud pots boiling,
Bubbling viscus liquid
Geysers erupting throughout.
Copyright ©
gentledove
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2004-07-22 23:01:15]
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Re: Yellowstone (A Naga-Uta)
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:09:47 PM AEST
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Never heard of this form...but it's picture perfect!!!!
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Re: Yellowstone (A Naga-Uta)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:15:10 PM AEST
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I am so glad you enjoyed your trip. It is full of amazing sights. Thank you for sharing this picture with us. I had never heard of this poetry either. It is lovely. Welcome back. You were missed.
Rita |
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Re: Yellowstone (A Naga-Uta)
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by 01_zanzebar on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 11:32:55 PM AEST
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a naga uta means 'long song' dunnit, sorry to poor water on the fire, i have to say it isnt either long or a song, dunno whats going on
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Re: Yellowstone (A Naga-Uta)
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 12:43:16 AM AEST
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well i loved it, beautiful poem ...i looked it up after i saw what zanzabar said, and i found: "naga-uta: japanese poetry form of indeterminate length that alternates lines of five and seven syllables and ends with an additional seven-syllable line." .. so its near perfect!! beautiful pictue too!! wow, your poem is so discriptive, im giving you a 5star:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Yellowstone (A Naga-Uta)
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by pixie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 08:37:52 AM AEST
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wonderful :)
pixie xx |
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